Just finished my second listen-through! First time was before bed, second time was while I was cooking.
I love the premise of the story and it was really fun hearing it read.
I have a stupid embarrassment squick so sometimes I find it hard to read situations where a character is (un)knowingly making a fool of themselves. Stiles being Stiles, that can happen a lot, but I find it easier to listen to it rather than read it.
I did want to let you know that when you read the word 'disconcerting' it sounded like 'disconcerning'.
Also, on Derek's voice, it sounded like it should fit but at the same time it didn't sound wholly natural. Maybe toning it down a bit would help if possible.
I liked how clear your reading was, that's always something I appreciate.
I'm off to rec this now. :) Already rec'ed it to my friend.
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Date: 2012-08-17 12:11 am (UTC)I love the premise of the story and it was really fun hearing it read.
I have a stupid embarrassment squick so sometimes I find it hard to read situations where a character is (un)knowingly making a fool of themselves. Stiles being Stiles, that can happen a lot, but I find it easier to listen to it rather than read it.
I did want to let you know that when you read the word 'disconcerting' it sounded like 'disconcerning'.
Also, on Derek's voice, it sounded like it should fit but at the same time it didn't sound wholly natural. Maybe toning it down a bit would help if possible.
I liked how clear your reading was, that's always something I appreciate.
I'm off to rec this now. :) Already rec'ed it to my friend.
Thank you for sharing!